Interlude
InterludeGreen tendrils reach for a new hold,anchoring vines as they worm upto claim another branch beforesummer's climbing season can close.Honeysuckle's distinct bouquet,shaded on a whispering...
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what a sensual write..those green tendrils and sinewy vines wrapping around one another...and all this in the sweet headiness of honeysuckle...A delectable read...thank youalice, whose perhaps seeing...
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H MichaelYes, there is that interlude between one season's closure and the next one's beginning. You capture that wistful span of time with vibrant and haunting imagery. This is absolutely lovely and...
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This is a very good write. I'm curious as why you made the line break after 'before' and 'note'? I'm experimenting with line breaks and I fascinate over these kind, but I'm not sure why?It's powerful...
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Board, Bravo! What you were able to create from Jean's words is a magnificent write! Zaida.
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Thank you all. Pinionmind, mostly the reason is that I was keeping to 8 beats (syllables) per line. In general, though, it's a common technique in poetry to let a thought continue from one line to the...
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Board..nice use of challenge words that present a lovely interludeDid you forget the word "could"Deb
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Deb: Thank you. And to answer your question - not at all! Remember that you are allowed to use all forms of the challenge words. If you look up "could" on dictionary.com, you'll find that "could" is a...
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Quote:Pinionmind, mostly the reason is that I was keeping to 8 beats (syllables) per line. In general, though, it's a common technique in poetry to let a thought continue from one line to the next...
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In this case, "common technique" mostly means that enough people do it that it's actually got a name. Here's a scattering of places where you can find brief descriptions of common poetry terms....
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Michael ~"breathes tranquility as a notepassed between lovers: te amo."Love the close!WELL DONE! ~ Maire
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